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.: Lord Zorrix :.
The Dark Lord of the Sith


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:55 pm    Post subject: Darth Veneficus formerly known as Zorrix-Approved Reply with quote
The Basics
Name: Veneficus (former Grey Jedi Lord Zorrix)
Nickname: n/a
Alias: Dark Lord of the Sith
Home world: Naboo

Looks



Age: 28 (As of 90 ABY)
Gender: male
Species: Falleen

Eyes color: sulfuric yellow with red rims around the pupil and outer edge of the iris
Hair color: none, after becoming a Dark lord of the Sith, he shaved his head
Facial features:
Skin tone: Red
Height: 2.0 meters
Weight: 200 lb
Build: muscular

Tattoos: Sith Tattoos
Body art: none
Scars: Has a large scar over his left eye.
Piercings: none

Appearance: : Zorrix is from the semi-aquatic cold-blooded reptilian species known as The Falleen. He has sleek symmetry features calculating cold demeanor and exotic looks that is the norm of his species. Zorrix has the ability to alter his skin pigmentation that makes The Falleen to be among the most aesthetically pleasing beings in the galaxy. To add to his strikingly beautiful appearance, he naturally exuded pheromone which makes him like his species all but irresistible to both sexes. He has small scales all over his body as well as slightly clawed fingers and toes and prominent facial and spinal ridges common to the Falleen race.

Clothes: Zorrix wears a set of black Sith robe with cloak and hood. Both the robe, cloak and hood have gold and purple trim.  

After the rebuild of the GJO, Zorrix traveled to Hendanyn, where he had a Hendanyn death mask crafted for him. This mask would not allow hide his face but would store all of his memories so the legacy of the Grey Jedi and his personal force philosophy would live on after his death.

When the Falleen made his transformations to the Sith he forsaken the mask in the ruins of the Grey Jedi temple. His reason for discording the mask instead of keep it was because it holds the thoughts and ideas of Zorrix his former life. A life that he wish to be rid of.





Personal Details

Personality: Because of his Falleen heritage, Zorrix is arrogant and has excellent self-control. At times he can seem cold-hearted but he cares a lot about the Jedi Order and the innocent. He is calculating, always thinking ahead in battle. He is able to use the dark side of the Force because of his self control which lets him use his emotions without letting them control him. He also believes in protecting the innocent from those who will use power to harm them.

Since he taken the mantle of Dark Lord, He is now a cold-hearted, evil person that has no regard for the lives of others. Being a master of Sith Alchemy, he views others only as possible experiments, and test subjects. While training to become the Dark Lord of the Sith, Darth Veneficus cruelty knew no bounds. The Falleen seems to take extreme joy in causing others as much pain as possible, and excels in torture, both with the Force, and without.  

Force Sensitive: yes

 
Faction: Sith
Rank: Dark Lord of the Sith

Strengths:  Because of his Falleen teaching, Darth Veneficus excels at diplomacy and  reading others. His emotion control allows him to you both sides of the force with fear of falling to the Dark Side. He can command the Force with ease and has good lightsaber skills.

Weakness/Flaws:  Darth Veneficus is unable to hack into computer systems and has almost no technical skills. Because many Falleen find blaster-type weapons and hand to hand combat uncivilized, the young Falleen had no desire to learn how to fight with his hands or with a ranged weapon., blaster-type weapons, hand to hand combat, technical skills

Other Information:

Languages: Basic and Falleen

History:

Zorrix spent most of his younger childhood at home, being educated by his parent’s. They taught him everything about the Falleen, the history, culture, and rules of Falleen society. During this time, Falleen arrogance, self-control, and disdain for all other “inferior” races. When he reached the age of eight, Zorrix was able to control the alteration of his skin pigmentation, effectively disguising his emotions from other beings. It was also around this time that the children around Zorrix began to stay away from him. They had begun to notice that beings who offended Zorrix tended to become very sick afterwards.

In an effort to enable their son to gain a position of public power, his parent’s sent Zorrix to the diplomat’s academy in Theed when he reached age thirteen. His reputation preceeded him, and the school soon divided into two groups, those who steered clear of him completely, and those who were too frightened of him to risk displeasing him. However, as the people who displeased became sicker and sicker, the group of his followers dwindled away to a pathetically small number. Zorrix began to keep quiet, his hatred for these other species and Falleen pride not allowing him to speak with them to address their “weaknesses”, as Zorrix often called it. In time, Zorrix only spoke to his instructors and to his most devoted followers.

His early years at the academy were extremely harsh on him, as Zorrix had begun to emit pheromones constantly, causing him to become very popular with the female population of the academy. After several fights, Zorrix made a point of gaining control of his pheromone production. However, there was times when Zorrix would lust after a particular female, and “persuade” her to become better acquainted with him. One such incident led to him getting into a fight with the girls boyfriend. After the fight, Zorrix was so angry at the guy, wishing him a penance in all the hells of Mustafar, when the boy became so ill, that he slipped into a coma, never to awaken. After this incident, Zorrix became one of the most feared students at the academy. He was never connected to the illnesses of his opponents, but the professors had an idea that he was doing it.

During Zorrix’s last year at the academy, he received the news that his parent’s had died. It was an attempted mugging, his parent’s fought back, both being shot dead. However, a recently discharged DL-44 was in his father’s hands, and red blood on the ground, leading authorities to believe he had wounded his assailant. Zorrix took justice into his own hands, hacking into the city database and finding the hospital which housed the most recent blaster wound victim.

When Zorrix arrived at the hospital, he truly learned the full powers of his pheromone skill. He made a nurse so infatuated with him, that persuading her to kill the patient took less than six words. After that, he convinced the woman to kill herself as well. Afterwards, Zorrix decided to remain on Naboo no longer than his graduation. Once he gained access to his inheritance, he sent a message to the best HRD Company in the galaxy, ordering the creation of a droid. Then, he searched the shipyards of Naboo, finding a nearly new YT-2400. After purchasing it, he hired a mechanic to modify the ship. After graduation, Zorrix took his ship and left Naboo behind, hopefully forever. He retrieved his droid, whom he named Zaran, and began to travel the Outer Rims.

It was during a random stop on Geonosis that Zorrix encountered a deserter of the Sith. Apparently, the man had left when he was an Acolyte, unable to stomach the training. During their conversation, he let slip that Zorrix could use the Force. Seeing a new, more powerful future, ahead of himself, Zorrix shot the man dead, took his lightsaber, and set his ship for Korriban.

Upon arriving at Korriban, and begin his training, Zorix became more and more frustrated. His teachers were to slow, or didn't recognize his skill in certain lessons. When the frustration became too much, Zorrix left Korriban, and traveled to Katarr, to join the Grey Jedi.

For three year, Zorrix has train in the art of the Grey Jedi. It took a lot of hard work, but he was able to survive the harsh training of the order. This training had pushed him to his limits and changed him.  After completing his training and going on several missions with his master he was finally given the rank of Grey Jedi Knight.

Even as a Grey Jedi Knight, Zorrix still had a lot to learn. He would spend extra time he had studying in the Grey Jedi archive. A couple of month after becoming a Knight, he left the order to gain a better understanding of the force. For about two years, he traveled sought out and trained with many different force organizations. He spent most of his time with the Baran Do Sages and the Zeison Sha.

Now armed with greater knowledge of the Force, he returned to the Grey Jedi, where he was welcomed with opened arms. Upon his arrival he was given the title of lord and place on the Grey Jedi Council along with his former master and best friend, Walker. He became the head teacher of the order forming bonds and connections with many of the young-lings and students. This was a job that Zorrix truly enjoyed. It was during this time that his friend Walker suddenly disappeared from the The Grey Jedi. The young Falleen wasn't too worry, his friend could take care of himself.

A couple of months later, Zorrix found out heart breaking news, Walker left the order and became Dark Lord of the Sith. Although he was betrayed by what happened he knew that he had to kill his former master, to stop him. As he waited for this battle to come, he prepared himself doing everything u could to gain power, power enough to defeat he dark-side.

The Battle of Geonosis was a bloody and brutal affair between the mechanized armies of the Grey Jedi and the dark side beasts commanded by the Sith. Zorrix was the one who meet the Walker now known as Recrus on the plains of Geonosis. As they fought, the Grey Jedi asked his former master why they were at this point right now. The Dark Lord of the Sith just smiled and give him a very simple answer. The Grey Jedi were falling apart, collapsing from a weak leadership, it's destruction had to take place in order for the Galaxy to survive. It was a truth that he had discovered not too long ago, and the more Recrus explained to his former padawan the more Zorrix lost his will to fight.  Eventually, the fight ended with the Grey Jedi Lord deactivating his light-saber and fell to his knees in defeat. It was then and there that he forsake his ties to the Grey Jedi and to a better order The Sith. To test his conviction, he was ordered to destroyed to future of the Grey Jedi the very young-lings he taught and trained. It was an action which forever killed the Falleen known as Zorrix.

In the end, the Grey Jedi enclave was destroyed, torn asunder by the force energies and monsters aimed against it. The Grey Jedi were ultimately defeated, its members destroyed or converted into the ranks of the sith.

However, the sith did not emerge unscathed in their victory. Due to the devastating effects of the amount of dark-side energy he commanded, The dark lord's body was wasted and weak. He had no choice but to enter a healing trance if he wished to survive.

Fearing the power that Recrus commanded, the surviving sith executed a quick betrayal of their Dark Lord, removing him from power. Encasing him in a stasis chamber, the sith sealed Recrus within the confines of the catacombs beneath the ruined Grey Jedi enclave. Fearing his retribution should the Dark Lord awaken, the sith removed his sword and amulet.

It was then that the former Grey Jedi Lord Zorrix, knowing that other sith would use such power to take control, stole these artifacts and hid them himself. The sword was sent to a lonely planet in Wild Space, the exact location of which only he knows, and the amulet was kept for study before hiding it away within a cave on Lehon.

Back on Korriban, He watched as the remaining Sith fought for control of Recrus's Sith Seeing this was the perfect time to train himself in the ways of the Sith, he took the many holocrons that Recrus owned and journey to Zoist a loction mentioned in the former Dark Lord's notes and threw himself into the dark side. As he looked through, the former dark lords notes about the structure of the New Sith Order, he decided that he agreed with the changes that was made and that he would in no way change them.  

Many months later, he returned to Korriban as the new Dark Lord of the Sith, Darth Veneficus. His image was completely changed, His eyes changed from there brilliant blue to sulfuric yellow with red rims around the pupil and outer edge of the iris. Be a falleen, he altered his skins to a blood red tone and adored himself many Sith tattoos and he completely shaved his top knot leaving him with a bald shiny head. Standing before the remaining Sith, he only said three words, "Obey or die" Sensing that no one in the order was as powerful as he was, they kneel before him pledging themselves to Darth Veneficus's Sith Order.

Now with the Sith under his control he, relocated the entire order to Ziost an ancient and powerful world of the ancient Sith. From this dark world, Veneficus removed the Sith from the view of the Galaxy back to the world of shadows and secrecy.              
                 


Items

Force Powers:
Force Powers Legend:
(1 - 40%) Weak
(41 - 60%) Moderate
(61 - 90%) Strong
(91 - 100%) Mastered

Sith Alchemy: 100%
Sith Magic: 100%
Deadly Sight: 75%
Drain Knowledge: 75%
Force Storm: 75%
Force Crush: 75%

Know Sith Magic Spells:
Force Blast
Illusion Casting
Summon Fear
Summon Darkness

Lightsaber Styles:
Form V: 100%
Telekinetic lightsaber combat: 100%
Dun Moch: 100%

Weapons: a red, single bladed, curved hilt light-saber and a double-bladed sith sword crafted using Sith Alchemy


Ship: HT-2200 medium freighter manned by a crew of slaves under Veneficus control.

Vehicle: none

Droid: An HRD with near perfect human appearance. It resembles a human female, about 26 years old with an athletic build, black hair and eyes, and dark skin. She has several notable imperfections, namely, her reflective eyes, metallic skin, and lack of a moving mouth when she speaks. Known as Zaran, she cost Zorrix a total of five million credits, a third of his inheritance. She functions as a pilot, protocol and translator, recording device and holo projector. She is also equipped with self-preservation and assassination programs.

After the fall of the Grey Jedi, Veneficus destroyed her as a way of testing his devotion to the dark-side. He had her replaced with two Hssiss that he found on Zoist.

 

Use able By: Darth Veneficus


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... Now i remember why we outlawed grey jedi. They breed like mad....  Shocked  Shocked  Shocked  Razz
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Updating bio to match the new ranking system for the GJO
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