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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 2:15 am    Post subject: Naltor big sith-Approved Reply with quote
b] The Basics[/b]
Name: Naltor
Alias: N/A
Homeworld: Giju

Looks


Age: 23
Gender: male
Species: herglic


Eyes color: black
Hair color: N/A
Facial features: *see pic*
Skin tone: black

Height: 8ft. 4in.
Weight: 1300 lbs.
Build: muscular

Tattoos: A silver colored katarn covers his entire right arm.
Body art: none
Scars: Several large, thin lines across his body. These are results of his time in prison.
Piercing's: none

Appearance: *see picture*
 
Clothes: Usually consist of a simple pair of pants, brown synth-leather boots, a vest, and a pair of durasteel cuffs. He also wears a standard utility belt, brown in color.


Personal Details

Personality: Like many Herglic, Naltor used to be peaceful, until he got arrested for hauling spice and sent to the prison world of Kip. During his five year sentence, he came to realize that there was only one rule to the universe: The Strong survive. During his time in prison, he adapted his life to fit this new rule. His size and considerable mass helped him with this. As the years went by, he began to exercise this rule on every level of his life. Not only physically, but mentally as well. In fact, since he was one of the most watched prisoners, he often had to resort to out thinking other beings to get even with them. This has led to him being a very cunning, very cyncial being. He's also more than slightly sadistic, clearly enjoying himself as he causes others pain.


Force Sensitive: Yes

Alliance: Dark Side
Guild/Group: Sith Order
Rank: Acolyte


Strengths: Naltor only has four things going for him. He's really big and strong, really cunning and strategic, a skilled fighter, and he's very good at reading people. Consequently, he values that last trait the most, since it allows him to manipulate people without too much trouble. He's also a very skilled mechanic and engineer.

Weakness/Flaws:  Considering his size, Naltor is very poor at stealth. Let's face it, he has to carefully maneuver through most doors, so it's unlikely that he'll ever sneak up on you. He's also addicted to gambling. The thing is, he limits himself to games where he can see his opponents, like pazaak. He's also very sensitive about his size. Making jokes about his size is a very fast way to get him to lose his temper and start smashing things.

Other Information:

Languages: Basic


History:
Growing up on Giju, Naltor seemed like a pretty average herglic. Just like many of his species, he was close to his family. His interests revolved around technology, mechanics, and creating ships suited to his people's size. He was also fascinated with games of chance. In fact, he was drawn especially to games of chance. Whenever he played a game, or made a bet, usually, he'd recieve a vision, or a hunch of what was going to happen. Unknown to him at the time, this was his latent force powers emerging.

Unfortunately, it was these uncontrolled flashes of events that led to his downfall. When he was sixteen, he placed a bet on a swoop race. Placing all of his money, and then some, on a hunch. Unfortunately, the hunch was actually a warning of what not to do. Naltor lost  the bet, and found himself owing fifty thousand credits to the owner of a cargo hauling business. The man decided to use Naltor as a pilot until the herglic paid of fhis debt. Unfortunately, the man put an interest and fees on Naltor's debt that would have kept him virtually enslaved for the majority of his life.

After a year, Naltor decided to try and get away from his forced employer. The cargo hauling business was merely a front for the real business of smuggling spice. Hoping to get his boss in trouble, Naltor allowed his ship to be caught and impounded. However, when Naltor accused his employer, and the claims were investigated, they found no ties connecting the spice to his employer. Naltor was accused of smuggling spice in a company vessel, and was sentenced to five years on the prison world of Kip.

During his time in prison, Naltor became strong, harsh, and merciless. His size and gentle nature earned him several fights and many months in solitary confinement. Alone with just the darkness and his visions of the future, the herglic soon learned some sense of control over his abilities. Naltor was forced to adapt to this new, harsh environment solely for the purpose of surviving. In less than a year, he learned to use every tool at his disposal to work his way to the top of the prison pyramid. If he could, he hadnled any problems directly. However, when brawling or causing a fight wasn't a viable option, Naltor was capable of coming up with some plan to get the offending person in trouble.

Naltor served his prison sentence and returned to Giju. However, he didn't stay long. He had one goal, to kill the man who'd taken five years of his life away. It took almost a year, but Naltor killed his former employer, and stole his ship. Then, he decided to find somebody who could teach him how to control his powers.

Two months later Naltor's ship need repairs. In route Naltor's hyper drive went out, needing some where to land, Naltor looked at his navcomputer to see were he was, the only planet that came up was Korriban and so he went.

Items N/A

Force Powers:
Force Powers Legend:
(1 - 40%) Weak
(41 - 60%) Moderate
(61 - 90%) Strong
(91 - 100%) Mastered

Force Sense: 10%
Telekinesis: 45%
Telepathy: 15%
Force Deflection: 5%
Force Blast: 35%


Saber Styles
Form V: 40%
Sokan: 20%

Weapons: This is what his saber will look like when he gets it.



Ship: Horizon-class Star Yacht named Lucky Shot


Vehicle: N/A

Useable By: Well, me..


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 1:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Quote:
Naltor's went in search of somebody that could teach him how to control his powers two months in Naltor's ship need repars.


Okay just touch up this sentence and you should be good. An admin will come around and approve this for you. Welcome to the site.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 1:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
He said it, after its fixed let me know and ill aprrove it.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 4:50 pm    Post subject: Naltor big sith. Reply with quote
Ok I fix it
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 5:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 5:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Congratulations! Why haven't mine been approved yet?


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