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.: Aldar Natadare :.
Jedi Padawan


Joined: 05 Oct 2008
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:55 am    Post subject: Aldar Natadare Reply with quote
The Basics
Name: Aldar Natadare
Nickname: Aldy
Alias: Ryan Narberrie
Home world: Iseno

Looks

Age: 19
Gender: Male
Species: Human

Eyes color: Blue
Hair color: Blonde
Facial features: The normal facial features; mouth, nose, eyes, and ears.
Skin tone: White

Height: 5'9
Weight:
Build: Lightly muscular

Tattoos: None
Body art: None
Scars: None, yet
Piercings: None

Appearance: Aldar has a messy mop of blonde hair upon his head. He has a stance and posture that makes it easy to tell that he is a Jedi and that he is of a strict military lineage.

Clothes: Aldar wears only a pair of boots, the typical brown boots worn by most Jedi who adhere to the Jedi Robes as their sole form of clothing. Other than the boots he wears beige pants that are very similar to those worn by again Jedi who wear the Robes. The pants are situated low on his waiste and are not particularly clingy, actually they are rather airy. Aldar believes that clingy clothing restrains movement. He also wears a utiliy belt that carries his equiptment. Aldar choses to wear what is seen as little clothing not because he is flaunting himself or because he is an exhibitionist, but because he strongly adheres to most of the ideals of the old Jedi Order, namely in this case the one about not being attached to belongings. He sees clothing as a restriction and an attachment and only wears what he does because any less would be frowned on by society, not that his lack of clothing is any less frowned upon.

He dons the rest of the Jedi Robes only when needed, like during an important meeting or when the weather is much too cold for him to survive.

Personal Details

Personality: Due to Aldar's military up bringing he is a respectful young man. He has a good understanding of the chain of command and is obedient to it, yet he finds himself on odds with the teachings of the current Grand Master, who is in reality only a few years older than him. His Master also taught him strictly in Clone Wars era, Jedi ideology so he adheres strongly to them and finds them very easy to let his life be guided by these principals. He looks at the others in the Order as being lacks with their principals especially the new "anything goes" ideology of the current Grand Master. His adherence to the non-attachment and many other pieces of his ideology is looked upon by other Jedi as odd or out of step and out-dated with the new Order, but he still holds to them dearly.\

Also while his facial expressions may hide his feelings he has very expressive eyes that his emotions can be read through.

Force Sensitive: Yes

Faction: Jedi Order

Rank: Jedi Padawan

Strengths: Politics, Lightsaber combat, Healing related Force Powers, Medicine, and Telekinesis related Force Powers, works well with children.
Weakness/Flaws: Piloting, Shooting (via Blaster Pistol/Carbine/Rifle), struggles sometimes to control his emotions namely anger, a soft spot for children.

Other Information:

Languages: Basic, Binary

History:

Aldar grew up on the Inner Rim planet of Iseno. Like most on Iseno he was of a strict and proud military lineage. He from a very young age was raised very strictly. His parents were both high-ranking officials in the Iseno military and fought in the conflicts with the Jeeno. Thankfully Iseno was avoided for an unknown reason a by the invaders, but that does not mean it was left unscathed. Many of the high-ranking government officials were killed in terrorist acts committed by humans who had "allied" themselves with the Jeeno. This left Iseno unorganized. The fact that much of the populace was in the military meant that Iseno was still left rather peaceful even with the destruction of their government. Though it was not without its skirmished; the same terrorist group that attacked the government fought fiercely to throw the Isenoians into array, but to no avail. Once the Jeeno decided their "allies" were not longer needed they were eliminated.

This left much of Aldar's childhood environment in a very rocky state, but within the household he was held to a strict standard and if he fell below that standard the punishments he received were unusual and very laborious, yet not abusive. His parents found of his affinity to the Force when he moved objects without touching them. Sorrowfully, yet happily because he would be far from the disorder of Iseno, Aldar's parents gave him to the Jedi Order for training.

When he arrived at the Jedi Lyceum on Ruusan Aldar was at the young age of four, but had the maturity of someone much older than him because of his strict up bringing. He received his training lightsaber and started Youngling training almost immediately. Within seven years at the young age of eleven he was taken as a Padawan to one of the very few Masters left from the old Order. His Master built upon the strong roots his parents already instilled in him and taught him strictly in the old Order ideology. The ideology he was taught dated back before the Order immediately before the currently established one, but more like the ideology of the Jedi Order during the Clone Wars. This was because his Master was a Draethos and had lived many centuries and had that ideology instilled within him.

Aldar's Master was lucky in that fact that each time turmoil came to the Galaxy and the Order was destroyed he had the uncanny ability to go into hiding and ride out the conflict until a new Order was established and he then would join the newly established Order. This was done up until 79 ABY, it was at that time that Aldar and his Master were on a mission to the planet Nal Hutta. The mission was very simple the two were to retrieve plans that the Hutts had to expand their territory beyond Hutt Space. The mission went as planned and with nearly no skirmishes with the Hutts mercs until the two were about to board the ship they were to be taken back to the Lyceum on. As they walked into the clearing where their ship was suddenly about two-dozen mercenaries jumped out of the surrounding swampy woodland.

Both Aldar and his Master fayed well at the beginning of the battle but as it waged the two started to become very tired. In fear that the mission would be lost the Draethos handed Aldar the plans and almost instantly after handing them over he was struck in the head with a blaster bolt. Then the chest, and then the leg, and the chest again. Aldar watched in horror as his Master was killed. He quickly boarded the ship and closed the ramp. Using what knowledge he had he piloted the ship off planet.

He did not make it far before, because of his poor piloting skills he crash landed on the planets Nar Hekka, much to his dismay a Hutt controlled planet. Though the Force was on his side, the planet was a cold planet that was much to cold for the Hutts so they erected large buildings that they dare not venture from too often. As he was going down he managed to get a few distress signals off to the Lyceum. Though the Jedi Order wouldn't respond for a few months, and when they did they found a freezing and sickly looking eighteen year old who had fayed death in several occasions.

This part below is currently not cannon. We are debating whether or not you will be promoted this quickly. Until a decision is made you will be starting as a Padawan.
Upon reaching the Lyceum he went through the Knighthood and became a Jedi Knight. The Council had decided to make him a Jedi Knight because even before that fateful mission he had proved to be resourceful, but that mission with all of the feats he had to over-come proved that he was ready to become a Jedi Knight. Roughly a year later he had recovered from this event and is looking towards the future.

Items

Force Powers:
Force Powers Legend:
(1 - 40%) Weak
(41 - 60%) Moderate
(61 - 90%) Strong
(91 - 100%) Mastered

Force Push 20%
Force Jump 15%
Force Repulse 10%
Force Heal 5%

Weapons: A blue lightsaber


Ship: A modified YT-2400 light freighter

Length- 22 meters
Width- 26.7 meters
Maximum acceleration- 2,860 G
MGLT- 70 MGLT
Maximum speed (atmosphere)- 1,000 km/h
Engine unit(s)- KonGar KGDefender ion engines (3)
Hyperdrive rating- Class 0.75
Backup- Class 10
Hyperdrive system- SoroSuub Griffyn/Y2TG hyperdrive unit
Shielding- Power-boosted shield generators (248 SBD)
Hull- Reinforced titanium armor (102 RU)
Sensor systems- Military-grade sensor system
Targeting systems- Sienar Fleet Systems combat computer
Navigation system- Equipped
Countermeasures-
    Enhanced sensor countermeasure package
    Imperial sensor stealth coating

Armament-
    Dymek heavy dual laser cannon turrets (2)
    Concussion missile tubes (2) Standard load: 3 missiles each

Crew-  
    Pilot (1)
    Co-pilot (1)
    Gunners (2)

Minimum crew- 1
Passengers- 4
Cargo capacity- 70 metric tons
Consumables- 2 months
Other systems- Escape pod (1)

Vehicle: Air-2 racing swoop http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net...8/84/TaggeCo-Air2-swoop_negvv.jpg

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The Dark Lord of the Sith


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 8:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Okay, just put your force powers in more of a column list, and place how powerful they are next to it.
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.: Aldar Natadare :.
Jedi Padawan


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 6:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 1:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Looks good. I'm not sure what rank you'll get yet. 9 chances out of 10 your going to be a padawan like the rest mostly because of “fairness”, but you and others who are proving their rping skills will probably go through the ranks faster then normal sense currently there is just me and one other person who can train people (and since she is only a knight she can only train one person).

I'm going to change your skills on Force Powers simply to weak. Just like everyone else for now. If I decide to upgrade you automatiaclly your powers will be set at low like everyone else.

Welcome to the site though First just say "HI" in the sign in part of the Jedi section then post a "Searching for a Master" post. I will then have you training in the training area along with my other new Padawans.

A Jedi Saga is in the works right now though so don't be surprised if you "training" largely is dealt with in combat during our “mini war” instead of the traditional path.

That said welcome my man I hope you enjoy your stay. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 12:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Updated. I decided against not having a ship.



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